Loki Wyrd Posted September 5, 2003 Report Posted September 5, 2003 (edited) Here I sit A frog am I Fairly quick But not too sly Thinking of the days of yore Like yesterday And the day before I do recall the water fair And being put in a little girl's hair But now I am among the blades of grass Tall and long And hard to pass But I can leap into the clouds I fly far with each and every bound But in the distance I do hear A sound to me which is very queer Beneath my feet the earth does shake And my strong legs begin to quake I can feel the force draw nigh My heart grows still Darkness takes the sky I flee the only way I know In a panic As fast as I can go But the beast, it still does gain I hop faster My muscles strain Before I know it, the grass has ended I am in the open My luck has surely ended But to my surprise the beast does growl And it turns away With a scowl I am safe, at long last Nothing can touch me I'm just too fast Edited September 5, 2003 by Loki Wyrd
Peredhil Posted September 5, 2003 Report Posted September 5, 2003 This is wonderful fun. I can just picture the blue-eyed demoness child Rune and the Neato Necro Gnomie Girl Minta running up and down the halls (weaving in and out of legs like trees) singing this. Thanks for the mind picture and the poem.
Vincent Silver Posted September 6, 2003 Report Posted September 6, 2003 I enjoyed this,very (I dred to say the word) cute. Thumbs up from me.
Tattered Posted September 6, 2003 Report Posted September 6, 2003 You have creativity for MILES. Your style is daunting. I do so like the poems you write in thoughtful imagination. Although sometimes the things you write frighten me. You have a talent, even power.
Appy Posted September 6, 2003 Report Posted September 6, 2003 *Appy can only agree with tattered* but you knew already that I like your way of writing
Loki Wyrd Posted September 6, 2003 Author Report Posted September 6, 2003 Thank you all for your responses, they are much appreciated. Tattered, you especially are much too kind. After reading your post I'm afraid my hat may no longer fit my head.
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