Mira Posted September 2, 2003 Report Posted September 2, 2003 A song that I wrote, that was inspired by a conversation with her. The lyrics are o.k. but I like the acutual guitar part better. To bad I can't share that. "Today is the day" she said With a smile on her face I wrote it all down Though it seemed like a waste And looking around I felt odd and out of place Like I was alone And she was there just incase She laughed at me I didn't care I liked her voice And she liked my hair I rambled on And tried not to stare But couledn't resist She wasn't aware
Peredhil Posted September 3, 2003 Report Posted September 3, 2003 Nice. I wish I *could* hear the music. I'm hearing guitar in my mind.
whynotsin Posted September 7, 2003 Report Posted September 7, 2003 It is very nice, fitting togther liike a puzzele.
Parmenion Posted September 7, 2003 Report Posted September 7, 2003 This was fun Mira - would also like to hear the music on this one too but did find the rhyming scheme coll enough to work as a poem equally. Well done
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