Vincent Silver Posted September 2, 2003 Report Posted September 2, 2003 Why can't I just say those lil' words? Will you even believe me when I do? How can I tell you what you mean to me How can I say "I love you"?
Peredhil Posted September 3, 2003 Report Posted September 3, 2003 She stood alone in the crowd Watching him watch her And wondered what lay behind his burning gaze. He hesitated so very long She'd've spoken but she was full of fear Couldn't handle the rejection: just one of those days. They parted again into their worlds Same planet is what they share Fear of pain brings loss of joy: Life is such a maze.
WrenWind Posted September 3, 2003 Report Posted September 3, 2003 she sat watching the would be lovers stare and part looks so fleeting then the masks cover preventing the start so sad to walk away for love is worth the pain
Parmenion Posted September 3, 2003 Report Posted September 3, 2003 Take your hand, Then take hers, Place her hand, Within yours. Squeeze it gently, Once, twice, thrice, Say it gently, To her eyes.
Appy Posted September 3, 2003 Report Posted September 3, 2003 Be around Don't back away The words You don't need to say Show it Feel it Live it The rest will go it's way
Lashienne Andvari Posted September 4, 2003 Report Posted September 4, 2003 Maybe some things Are best left unsaid A heart that's alone Is better left dead Give her wounds The time to heal And prove to her Your words are real
Alaeha Posted September 4, 2003 Report Posted September 4, 2003 If you can't say it right, if the words won't come out 'till she fades out of sight, then you still have some doubt. So... just think for a time. Be kind, and be there. Contemplation's no crime, though it may seem unfair. When the words still won't come, but you know that you know, (as has happened to some) then it's time that you show. *Hugs* (Not sure if it means anything to you, but there's my three bits)
reverie Posted September 5, 2003 Report Posted September 5, 2003 not a poem...just stuff... If you love her. Then you must know what she dreams of... If you know her dreams Then make them happen... If you love her 'cause everyone wants to feel their special... and find that special special one... and the occasional spoilage is nice too... but be careful that you really love her, and its not just you loving you loving her... revery the dreamlost "love the person, not the idea" the dream continues...
Peredhil Posted September 5, 2003 Report Posted September 5, 2003 but be careful that you really love her, and its not just you loving you loving her... Oh! That is SO true for so many people! The trap of which to be aware Consuming another on the altar of self...
Tattered Posted September 6, 2003 Report Posted September 6, 2003 Bravo, Every single one of you! Beautiful what you started Vincent and all those that followed after. I don't feel worthy to add more.
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