Parmenion Posted August 31, 2003 Report Posted August 31, 2003 And in my dreams I see you, though you do not have a face. I know that when I find you my Heart will know its place A place where inhibitions and defences are stripped bear… A place where smiles can speak for love and I’ll be happy there. ..where no-one knows the paths of choice but walking them as two will make decisions easier with one more point of view. It’s not a fleeting moment or experience that’s passed It’s friendship, trust and honesty… ..emotions built to last. And all of these are gift-wrapped protecting what is true. The thoughts I share are precious. The love I have – for you.
WrenWind Posted September 1, 2003 Report Posted September 1, 2003 Wow! *pauses and rereads* This is absolutely beautiful.
Appy Posted September 1, 2003 Report Posted September 1, 2003 (edited) Yes, absolutely beautiful.. you describe almost every inch of finding true love here, something I was so lucky to encounter, and I'm sure that you will find yours one day hun *huggles* ---------------- It’s not a fleeting moment or experience that’s passed It’s friendship, trust and honesty… ..emotions built to last. ---------------- I simply love the last line here, it's a poem on it's own almost Edited September 1, 2003 by Appy
reverie Posted September 1, 2003 Report Posted September 1, 2003 Random Impressions: Neat, simple, and shiny...thought poem Wishful and longing for someone you haven't met, but would like too... Falling for a ideal idea of someone else to give and return your love. Dreaming of a phantom lover. Cliche Advice: Do not look for love, let it find you. Not so Cliche Advice: 'nothing wrong with wishing for a companion to lighten up the dark, but lighten yourself up first, and companions will come... It's always been said "be yourself." But it's more than that. You have to become yourself fully. So grow, and keep growing...and the one you long for will meet you along the way... And then you can grow together... revery the dreamlost "so what if I was romeo in black jeans(michael penn)" the dream continues...
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