Appy Posted August 27, 2003 Report Posted August 27, 2003 (edited) Verify my existence for i am helpless without a referrence to the real world outside my head thoughts clouded images shrouded one question remains forever Who am I? [27 augustus 2003, Leverkusen] ----- ~on a lighter note.. the girl stood before me in line for traintickets~ Ode to the girl in front of me Hair flowing like currants of air made visible by smoke I want to touch feel the curls playing on my hands enjoy the softness the silk experience of her hair But i am not allowed by the current society I can only stare and dream We never met before... [26 augustus 2003, Leverkusen] Edited October 20, 2014 by Appy
Loki Wyrd Posted August 28, 2003 Report Posted August 28, 2003 The first one I really liked. The second one had a nice wistful tone to it (if that makes sense)...overall not really my style though, but that's just me.
Ayshela Posted August 29, 2003 Report Posted August 29, 2003 Appy - i like both of these. if you figure out how to figure out the answer, please let me know??
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