Vlad Posted August 22, 2003 Report Posted August 22, 2003 My emotion found, From deep within. A sin. A joy. A love. A hate. Lost to wander, Living blind. A sin, A love. A joy, A hate. What now? What? Love sin. Hate joy.
Chanz Posted August 23, 2003 Report Posted August 23, 2003 Nice play with words!!!!!!! I really liked this. To me it was just a nice, fun poem. Nice Job
Sorciere Posted August 23, 2003 Report Posted August 23, 2003 Very nice culmination, I liked it but wanted it to be longer for some reason, but I'm way too picky.
Tasslehoff Posted August 25, 2003 Report Posted August 25, 2003 I dont think I quite got this one Vlad. Next time im around IRC or MSN could you explain it to me? I am very curious
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