WaTTo Posted August 21, 2003 Report Posted August 21, 2003 A black depression heading my way a cloak of silence and dismay a visage of pain and suffering of truth that has long been hidden behind a mask of strength and courage a shattered soul has been revealed pieces scattered across a thousand miles malicious knife wounds cover my heart the pain and suffering become unbearable violent thrashings of pain and remorse crimson streams running from my body never stopping their relentless flow.. bleeding me dry from the inside out destroying me physically and emotionally corriding my very existance expanding on my fear and hate paranoia flowing like a fountain emotions tearing apart my very soul the essential core of my very existance shred apart like a piece of paper being run through slicing blades of steel red hot pokers of searing steel burning my eyes and all that they see excrutiating agony, but it can not compare.. to the pain in my heart that is being felt wracking the very existance of my being mortally wounding pride unparalleled dismantling the reality that i believed in living within myself thru this terror slowly shrinking from existance my body slowly decaying soon there will be nothing left my body dead and gone but that mask will remain to be forever on my grave
Peredhil Posted September 2, 2003 Report Posted September 2, 2003 The mask that pain wears, so as not to offend society A society that secretly wishes all pain to be deserved For then they needn't be involved, rise up to stop the madness which drives those with potentials to be destroyed. I liked the way you built increasing physical images of horror and pain, and then trumped them with the emotional to eclipse them all.
reverie Posted September 5, 2003 Report Posted September 5, 2003 this may sound strange... but the best way i've found to kick depression, is to stop enjoying it. Also, depression is natures fun way of telling us something is wrong... it could be anything... the trick is figuring out what that something is... revery the dreamlost "life's an orange: it's bitter, sweet, circular, and kinda messy..." the dream continues...
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