Solivagus Posted August 20, 2003 Report Share Posted August 20, 2003 Seven Wards of ancient lore, For earth's protection, wall and door. And one High Judge to command the Law, To wield the staff and guard the core. Seven Words to name evils might, To bind it's cruel, foul might. And one pure Judge to wield the staff, To bar the earth from evils sight. Seven hells for failed faith, For earth betrayers, man and wraith. And one brave Judge to stem the tide, To stop the evil calling foes to it's side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhapsody Posted August 23, 2003 Report Share Posted August 23, 2003 I sense a epic story behind all of this. It sounds like something out of legend, like the poetic works preceding Tolkein's Lord of the Rings. Is this in any way religious? Because I'm recognizing the seven deadly sins and the seven levels of hell from Dante's Inferno. But I'm not familiar with the seven Wards. I like the rhyme scheme, especially how it changes at the end. I liked this idea: And one pure Judge to wield the staff, To bar the earth from evils sight. Bravo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parmenion Posted August 24, 2003 Report Share Posted August 24, 2003 Very tasty! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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