DL_Snake Posted August 20, 2003 Report Posted August 20, 2003 I haven't been writing for a few months, hope you like this one. All comments are welcome! Wait, where are my keys? Nope, not my glasses, keys! Ah well, I need them anyway, Just put them on and I'm on my way. Let's see got a pen oh yeah need to write, Gotta remember to replace the light! That's it, where are my keys? I need them to get to Lee's! Sigh, groan, nearly forgot, Need to give my horse a trot. Little things, what do I need? I think I need to get some seeds. Plant a garden in a few days, Prepare for me mum's visitin' day. Now what was I looking for? Was it a phone, a book or a door? I've got my glasses, my seeds and my pen, Got my horse, gave it a walk over the land. Can't remember what I wanted, Now here I am, fed up and confounded. Oh forget it, I can't recall, I'll just take my keys and and go see Paul!
Parmenion Posted August 31, 2003 Report Posted August 31, 2003 LMAO! I'm so glad I dropped by this little ditty. This is a fabulously funny little piece and reminds me Dagwood if anyone has ever heard of him. It was an old B&W sitcom or movie - can't remember coz I haven't seen it since I was little but as far as I remember he was a complete and utter scatty fellow. Away from the game (of writing) for a few months and coming back onto the scene with something as funny as this is always a good sign. MORE!
Appy Posted August 31, 2003 Report Posted August 31, 2003 Ah i can only agree with Parmenion here, MORE! Lovely little piece this, made me smile big time thinking of how often I felt like that, coping with the hectics of todays life... wonderful
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