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[Vincent Silver]

Sorry I have been gone so long but here is a lil' poem I'm spining in my head:

 

 

The world is your stage,your note book,your canvas.

Your place to tell the world what was and what is

The world is your spotlight,your lime light, your fame

It's you place to rant and rave, and let people know your name

It's you heart, your soul,your love, your hate

It's for you to speak of your luck and of your fate

The world is your stage, your notebook, your canvas.

So put somethign worth while on there, somethign no one can miss.

 

 

Vincent Silver AKA Blake A. Cooley

[Wyvern]

I like this poem a lot, Vincent. It's direct in it's message, yet creative and intriguing in it's approach. I also really like the major theme of the poem, as it's certainly important to make your own unique mark in life. My major recommendation would be to read the poem back over and correct for spelling errors, as they disrupt from the flow of the piece at times.

 

Well done.

[Vincent Silver]

Blah spellings never been my strong suit. Plus I make more typeos than....well...something that makes a lot of typeos.

EDIT: Isn't it ironic that I made a typeo in that post

Edited August 9, 2003 by Vincent Silver