Passionsrejected05 Posted July 25, 2003 Report Posted July 25, 2003 Remember the time you held me in your arms and made me laugh till the tears streamed out? Remember how it felt just lying there listening to eachothers heart beats. Remember all the nights that I felt alive just for being here? Remember everday I was in your life? Whatever happens to those days? Waking up just glad to be here. What's wrong now? I wish I knew, what you were thinking, what you were going say. Now, I don't even know you. What happened to the guy of my dreams? My knight in shining armor has rasted to a faded and dirty gray. Who are you? Why am I even still here? Sitting in your house, on your computer, watching you T.V. Forever thinking of you. I just wish you knew.
Justin Silverblade Posted July 25, 2003 Report Posted July 25, 2003 Sad. A great poem, but a sad one. Thanks for sharing. I liked it. - Justin
Salinye Posted July 25, 2003 Report Posted July 25, 2003 Salinye, the forever Sappy romantic really liked this sad poem. I've made a few little changes I thought you might need below. :0) Just technicalities, nothing major. I hope to see more of your works!! Thank you for sharing! Remember the time you held me in your arms and made me laugh till the tears streamed out? Remember how it felt just lying there listening to eachothers heart beats. Remember all the nights that I felt alive just for being here? Remember everday I was in your life? Whatever happened to those days? Waking up just glad to be here. What's wrong now? I wish I knew, what you were thinking, what you were going say. Now, I don't even know you. What happened to the guy of my dreams? My knight in shining armor has rust to a faded and dirty gray. Who are you? Why am I even still here? Sitting in your house, on your computer, watching your T.V. Forever thinking of you. I just wish you knew.
Falcon2001 Posted August 6, 2003 Report Posted August 6, 2003 Good poem...wow I'm tired, I think I just fazed out for like 10 minutes.
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