Shadow of the Butterfly Posted July 25, 2003 Report Posted July 25, 2003 The soft caress of a life flown by Can be the most singular experience Of a life yet unmade
Justin Silverblade Posted July 25, 2003 Report Posted July 25, 2003 *blinks* Wow... Wonderful. Thoughtful - so very insightful. I liked this a lot. - Justin
Salinye Posted July 25, 2003 Report Posted July 25, 2003 OHHHHHHH I like that. Makes me wonder how easy it would be to turn it into a haiku. 7, 5, 7 ~Salinye
Alaeha Posted July 27, 2003 Report Posted July 27, 2003 (edited) Heh, even at this time of morning, it was short enough that I could read the whole thing. Impressive. *Hugs* It's good. Almost more of a poetic statement than I poem, I think... But unless it's distinctly a short story that just happens to flow and all that in a way that's poem-esque, you can call it a poem. Hmm... I think my message made more sense and was probably more meaningful before I edited it soas to have it actually say something. Oh well. If you want, you can ignore this paragraph and the previous one. *Rehugs* Edited July 27, 2003 by Alaeha
SoaringIcarus Posted August 1, 2003 Report Posted August 1, 2003 Cool! Life from the perspective of a butterfly larva! Nice to read you. -Icarus
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