Mira Posted July 22, 2003 Report Posted July 22, 2003 (edited) The Thief Holds all the cards And in their fear, the people love him They gobble up his lies He holds them in his hands The Thief He has the biggest guns He makes Shiva look a child He can strike you down From across the world But now I see his lies for what they are The hatred he'd had me feel for his enemies Is turned on him "But no" he says "It wasn't me, it was them" "They gave me these lies" His words burn my ears They fuel my fire A change will come. Edited July 22, 2003 by Mira
Rune Posted July 22, 2003 Report Posted July 22, 2003 Very nice free form. Great mental images and rapid change in scenary. It's clean cut and to the point. Thank you for sharing.
Vlad Posted July 23, 2003 Report Posted July 23, 2003 I like it, but I can't quite figure out why. I think it's the form of it.
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