WrenWind Posted July 15, 2003 Report Posted July 15, 2003 So many things I did not do with you. What are the questions should I ask? Was there anything I could do? Now all is hidden in a flask Every thing you told is untrue. You show the world only a mask The happy clown dressed all in blue Take your time review your cast Was every thing so bad where you grew? Too little ,too late it could not last Now the flowers will grow anew On a well kept grave that marks you've past
Sorciere Posted July 15, 2003 Report Posted July 15, 2003 I love three liners, I remember in junior school (elementary in the US I think) our teacher trying to explain to us how to write a three liner adn us looking at him as if he was weird. We were all brought up to think poems had 4 lines per verse and every other line had to rhyme. He changed my view on a lot of things, but poetry was the main thing, he opened my eyes. I really liked this wren, it's structure lends itself to the subject matter, I don't think the feeling would be as full if it was written in another form.
Parmenion Posted July 15, 2003 Report Posted July 15, 2003 :wizzie: I like this alot Wren! *hugs* It reminds me of an experiance of mine i especially like the last stanza! Very well done!
Beautiful Nightmare Posted July 15, 2003 Report Posted July 15, 2003 :wizzie: That was me not parmenion my stupid computar *Arwen kicks her computar*
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