WrenWind Posted July 8, 2003 Report Posted July 8, 2003 *Hugs* I like this . starts out a little low but you pull it out to be positive in the end. Just one of those days that i could just hug you to death
Salinye Posted July 8, 2003 Report Posted July 8, 2003 X X X!!! (No, not a porn title *grin*) You wrote! I'm just so glad!! I really liked that! I don't think that pulling one line through an entire poem is always pulled off successfully, and yet here you did it just right without any "cheese" sound to it at all. Thank you for sharing, I hope I get to read more of your work soon!! ~Salinye
Peredhil Posted July 8, 2003 Report Posted July 8, 2003 Oh! Well done. I liked this. Like Sal' said, effective use of repetition, 'specially since you pulled us in one side and then out the other. Since the Tuesday I'm having feels like a Monday which didn't end, I'm particularly pleased I made the time to read this. -P
Parmenion Posted July 10, 2003 Report Posted July 10, 2003 Good work X-Sabre. Thoroughly enjoyed this
Chanz Posted July 13, 2003 Report Posted July 13, 2003 I really enjoyed reading this. I liked how the attitude or mood changes. Nice Job
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