Annael Posted July 2, 2003 Report Posted July 2, 2003 I stand back and take a look A slight narrowing of the eye The colours reading before me like a book And a decision, yet not knowing why. A held breath and anticipation A slight touch here and there With a smile at such an occassion Adding a little brightness to the pair. I put the paint brush down And smile at my creation Hoping that the creatures would turn the frown Of an upset brother into a cheer of ovation. You're not much for words Or outwards displays of affection So I honor you in a way That will still draw attention. We will hang together on your wall The brother and sister wolf The male standing straight and tall The female close but yet a little aloof. Slight and not the focus key For it will need a little detecting The observer will see That the younger sister this time, is doing the protecting. You've always been my strength from childhood to now, if I ever had any doubt as to why God put me on this Earth, I know now it is to watch over and protect the brother that I hold so dear.
Parmenion Posted July 3, 2003 Report Posted July 3, 2003 Family is really something! I enjoyed this annael! /me runs off to hug everyone in the family
Dragolin Posted August 9, 2003 Report Posted August 9, 2003 *waves at Annael* wow lots of am ppl here, never would have imagined, haha, I like the poet in all of us!
Justin Silverblade Posted August 9, 2003 Report Posted August 9, 2003 A great piece. Thank you for sharing.
Beautiful Nightmare Posted August 9, 2003 Report Posted August 9, 2003 O wow i love this poem reminds me of me and Parmenion! *runs off and hugs Parmy* hehe! :wizzie:
Peredhil Posted August 10, 2003 Report Posted August 10, 2003 How family should be, and too often isn't. Gently kisses her forehead and buffs her halo, then turns before the tear in his eye spills over.
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