Beautiful Nightmare Posted June 28, 2003 Report Posted June 28, 2003 Its just a misunderstanding You have to understand It’s just a misunderstanding That got out of hand You don’t know what I’m thinking So, don’t try to imagine You never could imagine The hurt I feel inside I can’t believe you thought that I thought you knew me better It goes to show You never know Who truly is your friend You made me hurt You made me cry You made me hate myself inside Something I never did you made me pay for Now all I want is to be dead on the floor You made me hurt You made me cry I can’t believe you’d think id lie I can’t believe you thought that I thought you knew me better It goes to show you never know Who truly is your friend All I want to say is I wish you’d go away I loved you But now it’s over, my friend Because all our fun times are now at an end
ImmortalGrace Posted June 28, 2003 Report Posted June 28, 2003 I think it needs some work on the timing... its hard to get a good beat on it. Other than that, I think its good hugs n sises, Tara
Beautiful Nightmare Posted June 28, 2003 Author Report Posted June 28, 2003 Thanks for your opinion i value everyones views!
WrenWind Posted July 1, 2003 Report Posted July 1, 2003 strong emotions thought through and brought to conclusion ...good work!
Dragolin Posted August 9, 2003 Report Posted August 9, 2003 it seems you write a lot of sad poems, maybe your way of coping with your emotions and it can feel good to get it out of your system, I know write me a jolly poem, it could be nice too, no?
Beautiful Nightmare Posted August 9, 2003 Author Report Posted August 9, 2003 Dragolin i will try write a happy poem but most of the time i only write when i am down! Its when i can just sit and write for hours and lets my emotions get transfered onto a page! When i am happy i mean actually happy which is very rare indeed i do not feel the need to write.
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