Beautiful Nightmare Posted June 27, 2003 Report Posted June 27, 2003 I’m sitting in my room With nothing else to do except think of you I want to run away from the pain Which you caused me today It’s not fair the way you treat me The way you throw me away It’s not fair how you beat me The way you hit me to stay Inside of my head You are the one for me But my body thinks differently It’s getting worse It’s getting bad I’ve had as much as I can have In my world you were my shining glory Now you’re just drunken and gory I can’t take the pain I have to get away Away from you
ImmortalGrace Posted June 27, 2003 Report Posted June 27, 2003 i really like it, hun. the only thing i would think about changing is "my body thinks differently" it just sounds off. other than that.. really great job! hugs n sises, Tara
Peredhil Posted June 28, 2003 Report Posted June 28, 2003 Very vivid image. I think that only someone who's been in an abusive relationship releases how hard it is to let go. It's so easy to say, "leave!" Hugs You have talent, you have the courage to post, and you have something to say. I look forward in complete confidence to watching you grow. -Ancient Ole Peredhil
Vigil StarGazer Posted June 28, 2003 Report Posted June 28, 2003 "In my world you were my shining glory Now you’re just drunken and gory" Touche, Touche
Parmenion Posted June 28, 2003 Report Posted June 28, 2003 *Hugs little one* Good to see you started writing. All my love and enjoyed reading this very much. Keep it up my dear, I look forward to more
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