autumn_sun Posted June 27, 2003 Report Posted June 27, 2003 (edited) [[i...uh....don't ask me about this...I don't have the heart to explain]] In a bedroom or maybe a clubhouse we swore by spit Best friends forever But what is forever? How long is forever? Until we grow and become distant? Become our own person Individuals. No longer following rules Until the ones we called our second parents come up to us and say "We won't let you see her." Is that forever? The time spent alone wishing we could change the past Wishing we could have said the right thing Instead of the wrong? Is that forever? The precious memories. The only things we have to hold To remember each other by Is that forever? What is forever? More importantly... What would you do.... If you knew...? Edited June 28, 2003 by autumn_sun
Peredhil Posted July 2, 2003 Report Posted July 2, 2003 Hmmm. I read this, and I'm reminded that just because people are young, their feelings may not be. I'm mindful of the lesson to parents set forth in Romeo and Juliet. There's a thin line between being protective and being confining.
Damon Inferel Posted July 4, 2003 Report Posted July 4, 2003 Meow... you almost made me cry with this Pip. I guess it's because I understand what you mean so well... It's a beautiful poem Pip in all writing aspects, and even more so because I know how you feel...
Elwen Posted July 5, 2003 Report Posted July 5, 2003 *wipes a tear out of her eyes* Wow...this is beautiful, Pip. I think I have an understanding of the situation now...I hope everything works out. *thwacks Merry's parents*
smallscale_mind_games Posted July 6, 2003 Report Posted July 6, 2003 Merf...I saw this before, but didn't comment, because that's what I do. Ja, I'm pissed at my parents...thank you for thwapping them, Lynne-ish. Nice poetry.
Parmenion Posted July 6, 2003 Report Posted July 6, 2003 O wow i love this its the exact same as wat i went threw with my ex best friend wow it brought lots of memborys flooding back! Its excellent
Beautiful Nightmare Posted July 6, 2003 Report Posted July 6, 2003 That was me by the way not parm sorry
autumn_sun Posted July 7, 2003 Author Report Posted July 7, 2003 Mmm...thanks everyone..I appreciate the feedback... I just have this to say.. There'sa very fine line between best friend and lover. I'm not crossing it, but everyone is blurring it. Hm. I find this rather interesting....
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