Elvida Posted June 25, 2003 Report Posted June 25, 2003 You tell me to forget, but I can't. They ask me why I still love you, but I can't say Everything that's happened, I somehow forgive you, But you've hit me again, and I can't let go. You say you have a reason, but I think thats a lie You're just scared of what I still feel inside. They think that I'm hopeless, that I'm not worth their time But they're just scared of what I can do. I know this doesn't make any sense, You'd have to feel the same. And hopefully this will come to pass And I'll somehow forget this pain. ---------------------------------------------
Vlad Posted June 26, 2003 Report Posted June 26, 2003 Wow. This stirred mixed feelings in me. Not sure what I'm thinking about it, but it's powerful writing. Descriptive enough to matter and vague enough to let everyone relate. Not sure what inspired this (hope you're not being abused) but it's good.
Elvida Posted June 27, 2003 Author Report Posted June 27, 2003 NOT the abusive hitting...NO bleeding way. but the emotional hitting ya know when someone says they love you and then they hit you with "I think we should break up" after a couple months. that kind of hitting
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