Damon Inferel Posted June 23, 2003 Report Posted June 23, 2003 I miss my friends, Is this how it ends? Am I going to be alone? Time is cruel, Am I just a fool? My, how emotions have grown. I spend time apart, It burns out my heart, Such sadness I have not known. (If there's anything wrong with the grammar or anything, I just want to note that I'm too depressed to care right now, but critiques are still welcome. Just a little lyrical stylings from the corner of my darkened mind.) >;_;< >;_;< >;_;< (Very sad kittens)
autumn_sun Posted June 23, 2003 Report Posted June 23, 2003 (edited) I like this. Like this a lot. -nodnod- Yeh...I relate to this immensely.-blinks- sort of...yeah. I REALLY REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS!...in other words...I'll shut up now that I've proven to the word what a nimrod I can be when I get all choked up. --; Edited June 24, 2003 by autumn_sun
Elwen Posted June 24, 2003 Report Posted June 24, 2003 *gives her ashke a hug* Wonderfully written, ashke (can't let that critique slide...) and I won't let you be alone!
smallscale_mind_games Posted June 24, 2003 Report Posted June 24, 2003 *Sniffles* pertyful...I really like the rhyme-rhythm-y thing... (^.^)~ Expressionless kitty! Fits all your kitty needs!
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