Vlad Posted June 10, 2003 Report Posted June 10, 2003 The sweet wisps of lost nights, The dawning of a new day's sun, Like the wind that chills- I will be gone, but not forgotten. A shadow looming over, The haunting of the past, Like lost children's toys- My memory fades away. _______________________ First thing I've tried to write in a while, trying to get over my block.
HopperWolf Posted June 10, 2003 Report Posted June 10, 2003 haunting and striking. I like. The imagery is, for me, just the right blend of subtlty and vividness. well done
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