autumn_sun Posted June 7, 2003 Report Posted June 7, 2003 [[or written in his POV. either way, Nny/JtHM is ©Jhonen Vasquez]] Immortalize the Moment One eye opens slowly Lying in a pool of red He looks over at the other No response, skin pale and cold A scream A shudder All is not well Last words spoken Last feelings expressed Blood coated body Flashes of the night before Sadistic laughter Flash of silver A twisted smile Spray of crimson The sound of a body Falling Falling Hitting the ground A cry for mercy Immortalize the moment…. A loving caress against her cheek Blade drawing blood Make the moment last forever Paint her portrait in her blood Immortalize the moment….
Damon Inferel Posted June 10, 2003 Report Posted June 10, 2003 Untitled Reply... (morbid poemy stuff) blood runs warm throat is torn no muffled scream no sound larynx clenched in bloody fingers painful gasps of air escaping from the wound hands drawn tight around the blood pressure failing falling to the ground blackness closes concrete slaps painfully skull shattering a fleshy mound mind losing grip fear overcoming death being brought the hammer's pound into the river dead, bloated flesh floats wounds fill with water victim drowned... (Fmrowr... you made me feel kinda sadistic... sorry, but it was a really good poem!) P.S. You'd really give me a pink kitty and Dew? Hn... (!_!) =surprised hamster >!_!< =surprised kitty
autumn_sun Posted June 10, 2003 Author Report Posted June 10, 2003 -winces- I did? Sorry....:\ And yesh! Of course! Why not?
Damon Inferel Posted June 16, 2003 Report Posted June 16, 2003 Meow... Meow! Meow... Meow! Meow... Meow! Oh... no, no Pip... sadistic is good. It makes me happy to picture killing things... erp... eh, shouldn't have said that...
Parmenion Posted June 16, 2003 Report Posted June 16, 2003 I can think of better ways to immortalize a moment than killing someone but I do enjoy a good old fashioned chop 'em up poem! As long as such thoughts remain just thoughts I'll sleep better
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