DoomGaze Posted June 7, 2003 Report Posted June 7, 2003 The Dreadful Reply ========================= Get out of my face, and forget what we had, All these lies created our downfall. Am I supposed to write my feelings on a notepad? Or answer you whenever you call? It is over, nothing left but just utter disgust, And no, I'm not the one you should look at. You say, it'll take time to adjust? Well I don't believe in that! Nothing can change my mind, And nothing you can do, mend this broken heart. My feelings for you will be buried and hard to find, Our joined hands are forever now apart.
Nobody of Consequence Posted June 7, 2003 Report Posted June 7, 2003 I liked it, especially the line "My feelings for you will be buried and hard to find". I think everyone can relate to the anger that comes at the end of a relationship, as you go through your 5 stages thingie. I'm curious if you constructed an irregular rhythm as a way of depicting the emotional turbulence, or was this more of a train of thought thing?
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