Psimon Posted May 26, 2003 Report Posted May 26, 2003 Wild Rose ************************** A Rose by any name would smell as sweet as she whose tale I tell For deeds both fair and foul were done before the lady's heart was won The starting now is so well known I'll not repeat lest doubt be sown. The past has passed, suffice to say that dark indeed did seem that day. For curse fulfilled, she softly slept a promise foul and wicked kept And so slept all that gathered 'bout, with thorns grown tall to keep all out. Now some were there who could resist, good fairies true did now assist. And battled they with demons foul till pressed on all sides, cheek to jowl. But hard they fought, saw hero freed, returned to him his faithful steed. So armed with Truth's great sword and shield, he ventured forth unto the field. Dark Queen's form did give him pause but sticking steadfast to his cause, he fought the dragon's fiery breath and would not quit, though close to death. He battled then - weak and weary battlefield so dark and dreary In Truth he'd place his ardent trust as silver blade to hilt he thrust into the dragon's heart. His throw cut Evil deep, a telling blow. As deep into the chasm fell the beast so black, he did not dwell. To castle rode the prince and to the highest tower he could view. Up stairs by numbers two and three he strode to set his true love free. Her beauty was beyond compare as softly she lay sleeping there. A moment she could not rehearse her true love's kiss did break the curse. And cause it was to celebrate, a royal wedding, guests and cake. Our couple lived for many years though that's a tale I'll not tell here.
Chanz Posted May 26, 2003 Report Posted May 26, 2003 WOW!!! That was amazing! You seem to love your daughter very much. I commend you on that. Nice Job
Parmenion Posted May 26, 2003 Report Posted May 26, 2003 Charming work Psimon - ever think of cracking the fairytales to poetry market? Excellent stuff man!
WrenWind Posted May 26, 2003 Report Posted May 26, 2003 This would make a great beginings to a collection of poems Love.
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