Chanz Posted May 26, 2003 Report Posted May 26, 2003 This poem is about a guy, but not a boyfriend or alike. It's actually about one of my teachers. Why do some people go behind your back, Even when they said you had their trust? The outcome makes me feel sick and black, Makes me want to kill them and leave them in the dust. Do they do it, because they were bored, Or because they thought they were helping me? Into them, my heart and soul I poured, What part of 'I wont tell anyone' did they not see? It makes me feel used and worthless, Hurt and full of anger. And feeling helpless, Do they think they can screw me round just 'cause i'm younger? If I had one wish, it would be to rid the world of people like that, Make the world an honest place. Even if it meant six years in combat, It'd be worth it, 'cause in the end I'd win the race.
DoomGaze Posted May 27, 2003 Report Posted May 27, 2003 powerful words and emotion in this poem, and sadly, we can never get rid of those people, they are always there. and by your name on MSN, i knew that you would make a poem of some sort. HAHA keep writing love it! lol..
Elvida Posted May 28, 2003 Report Posted May 28, 2003 GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!! I remember feeling like that...except it was with a best friend
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