Alaeha Posted May 25, 2003 Report Posted May 25, 2003 I wrote it when I was depressed a few weeks ago. Just now got around to typing it up because I realized that I've gone nearly inactive. Anyway, here's the poem... Questions, Comments, Complaints, Criticisms, and pretty much anything else starting with a "K" sound are welcome. Land of the Fey Locked off from the world, alone by his choice, he's lost in the darkness, unseen. Invisible? Yes, but no one hears his voice, and there's nothing, nobody to lean on. No one hears his cries, for he's shoved them away, and he's locked his depression inside. He's alone in his world, except for the fey and the demons. Alone. He can't hide. His family sees him, but rarely he speaks. When he does, no emotion is shown, for he knows that if ever his dark brooding leaks they'll take all that he loves, all he's known. In the Land of the Fey, in the Land of his Mind, all he knows is in danger. But yet, he can't truly fight, or the humans will find them and slowly they'll make him forget of the wonders he's seen and the peace that once came when he entered the world in his head. Trapped between two bad options, he bursts into flame in his mind, and he takes to his bed. Unable to save what he loved, though he tried, he preserved what was left, frozen still, when he died.
Sorciere Posted May 25, 2003 Report Posted May 25, 2003 Very dark poem, sucked me in as I read it, really good!
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