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The Pen is Mightier than the Sword

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Still

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So peaceful

No sound to disturb the void

No sound at all

Anywhere.

 

So very peaceful

You would think

there would be some sound

anything, but no.

 

Nothing

I'm alone here

Couldn't be more alone than this

And that will never change.

 

Just me, alone

I won't change either

Funny, really, how that can be so

But there you have it

Or rather, there I have it.

 

So funny I'd laugh

if I could, but I can't

So I'll cry instead.

I can cry in silence.

 

Yes, I can cry in silence, alone

in this place

Just me and my silent tears

So peaceful.

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Hmmm.

 

Death? Isolation? Deafness?

 

This reads on many levels and none. Speaking it aloud, some parts felt awkward - have you considered a rewrite?

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