Psimon Posted May 22, 2003 Report Posted May 22, 2003 Faceless ************** You're drunk! No - wait... No, it's me. I'm drunk. Sorry. Couldn't help myself. Was just gonna have one but - well, you know how it goes, eh? Still. Not as bad as this other guy I saw. Geez he was messed up. Thought he was going to puke all over himself. No, hang on a minute... Oh shit. That was me too. Can't think straight. Sorry. Yeah. Just gonna have one. Just one for the road. To remember Dave by. Shame about Dave, eh? Yeah. Shame. Good bloke was Dave. Yeah. Good bloke... Killed by a drunk driving son of a bitch! Bastard! Poor Dave never knew what hit him. Still. Probably best that it was quick, eh? How did I get home? I drove... Least I think I did. Yeah, I did. I drove... home. Shit. Shut up! Ok? Just shut up... I'll come to bed soon. I'm not talking to anyone! Anyone! You hear me? No one! You don't understand. Don't understand at all. Not at all, you hear!? Not at all. No. I miss you, Dave. Miss you, little bro. Miss you heaps. Sorry. sorry, eh?
Nobody of Consequence Posted May 22, 2003 Report Posted May 22, 2003 Nice job - don't change a thing.
DL_Snake Posted May 22, 2003 Report Posted May 22, 2003 Hey, sounds like something I'd like to give Eminem to sing! It's really nice =]
Sorciere Posted May 23, 2003 Report Posted May 23, 2003 Has a dark touch of realism to it, I really like it, the way he realises his own failings as soon as he speaks of them, but still has the denial.
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