Tasslehoff Posted May 22, 2003 Report Posted May 22, 2003 Well I decided I wanted to post this one seperate from my normal list because I am curious what all you have to say about this one.. I have thought and worked, and re-worked much on this one, and I feel its as far as it can go in my eyes. So here it is.. The Leave Breathe In.. Breathe out, One step after another; No looking back now, Each day starts anew; But the pains stays the same, There's no escape; World can't stop turning now, Laying down next your gentle face; The pain flows through my veins like a poison, Not wanting it to be this way, Thought of loosing you I disavow, Sweet Dreams are made of you; Satin lips and tender kiss', Knowing no matter what good I do; What wrongs I right, The day will still come when I have to depart this wonderful bliss' Leaving you in the past; Hoping to find you in the future, Gentle face; How I will miss Leaving your side..... Does it have to be this way? One step in front of another; It's all I can do, For in my Heart and Soul I know you will stay Breathe In.. Breathe out, PS: I wanna thank Peredhil for helping me a bit on it. Thanks.
Peredhil Posted May 29, 2003 Report Posted May 29, 2003 You're welcome. I'm sorry I didn't come looking for this until now. I'd plead busy, but I should've made the time anyway. I still like it, and I think it captures the feeling of the lover fearing to leave. Thought of loosing you I disavow I think you might have meant "losing" you, but it works well in a clever way as it is - he doesn't want to let her loose, for fear so won't return. It must be difficult to feel so much, in passion's grip to burn.
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