Chanz Posted May 19, 2003 Report Posted May 19, 2003 The very last line, will only make sense to peticular male! Nobody around Stranded all alone. So quiet, not even the dullest sound Not even a far away ring from a mobile phone. Stuck in an all too familiar world No one to turn to, no where to go. The only thing around: a dead girl in the corner with her hair curled So desperate for anyone, even a foe. Want to get out; run away But not allowd. Something forcing me to stay Probable something like: I should be proud. I am anything but proud:so full of shame Wanting to go to a cave and hide. But I have to play in life: a screwed up game If only I had a scrap of pride. I mite be able to make it 'till friday But tuesday even seems a struggle. I hate this game: I don't want to play For one reason I stay: your big huggle.
Alaeha Posted May 19, 2003 Report Posted May 19, 2003 *Laughs* The sad thing is that this makes sense to me, and I know I'm not the particular male you meant... Perhaps it's because many of my friends use the word Huggle. or Hugglez... Anyway, I liked this. Certainly used some unusual rhymes, which is always a good thing. *Hugs*
Vlad Posted May 19, 2003 Report Posted May 19, 2003 *shrugs* I like this, but I don't know why. This is good writing. (I think about three dozen people will understand the last line, or I could be way off...) *whistles innocently
Annael Posted May 19, 2003 Report Posted May 19, 2003 I like it. And I understand huggle as well. I often use the term
Ayshela Posted May 19, 2003 Report Posted May 19, 2003 *laugh* me too.. me too... and i'm not even a male, much less a certain male
DL_Snake Posted May 20, 2003 Report Posted May 20, 2003 I like your style (it reminds me of mine) haha
Chanz Posted May 21, 2003 Author Report Posted May 21, 2003 Thx guys! i'm definately sure what you are thinking of, is not what I mean by the word huggle, it had nothing to do with hugs at all! it's just a stupid lil thing we have! sorri 2 disappoint anyone who thought they knew it!
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