Psimon Posted May 19, 2003 Report Posted May 19, 2003 Enchanted ****************** What sorrow in the blackest night could break apart the chain that binds me to heartless sight and cuts me deep again. In twilight hours the shadows come, sweet visions of my end. To lift my eyes to silver tome 'pon which my soul depends. The silence of forgotten worlds, remembrance past and gone. Winds swirl stark banner left unfurled Soft lullaby, hell spawned. Forest hymns drift slowly down from dappled leaves, enthralled. Give substance to ethereal crown to which no heir is called. Euphoria of wisdom spent in search of worthy cause holds fast to madness that was meant to keep fate from what was.
Peredhil Posted May 29, 2003 Report Posted May 29, 2003 This reads like the prologue to a weary warrior's tale The fulsome fighter's plea It's not the bright shining bardic lies Told bairn on bended knee. It reeks of real, the pain, fatigue Which perhaps was the plan? The last two lines when read aloud For me just didn't scan...
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