Vlad Posted May 19, 2003 Report Posted May 19, 2003 One can hope But expect the least The greatest is not Awakened yet Relive the glory Feel the everlasting pain Through your mind Flowing like a raven In the polluted sky
DL_Snake Posted May 21, 2003 Report Posted May 21, 2003 very meaningful for me...though i wish it was longer
Tasslehoff Posted May 22, 2003 Report Posted May 22, 2003 Very short and quick there Vlad.. Well done.. Conveys a bit of imagery in such a small amount of words..
Ozymandias Posted May 23, 2003 Report Posted May 23, 2003 Maybe it's just me, but this almost sounds like a poem about Odin. Weird analysis aside, very evocative in a very short time. Impressive.
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