Cyril Darkcloud Posted May 19, 2003 Report Posted May 19, 2003 Wordless Wordless but not silent, the busy chatter of movement fills this place as hands open to the easy giving and eager taking of trifles scattered between corners, dragging hearts in panting dash from thing to touch and touch to thing. Rushing crowds out breathing and sets distracted lungs to snatching after bursts of air in a gasping give and take of morsels of breath to sustain our motion among the clutter we’ve strewn above the silence of stillborn syllables in the thin parts of our throats. This piece was put together in the Writer's Workshop. The series of revisions can be found here.
Peredhil Posted May 28, 2003 Report Posted May 28, 2003 I liked it there I like it here You criticize so well we give in to fear But to deny you praise Is to be silly goose My cheers I raise sung like Dr. Seuss. Good work Cyril. You seem to be an all-around writer. I'm pleased I can't pigeon-hole type you.
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