Psimon Posted May 18, 2003 Report Posted May 18, 2003 Space Haiku *************** 1. Dark is cold and still; Ice formed around my vision clouds views of heaven. 2. In the void I lie; Chill of the night runs through me as softly I fade. 3. In the cold I scream; No one to hear me pass the dark side of the moon.
Peredhil Posted May 28, 2003 Report Posted May 28, 2003 Heh, I'm a sucker for haiku in general, and anything that references Pink Floyd in particular.
Finnius Posted May 29, 2003 Report Posted May 29, 2003 We like Psimon's work, Haiku is a lost art form, Why was I plural? Headphones are turned up, Roger Waters? A genius. Pink Floyd freakin' rocks! I notice the time. My eyes are disappointed. I must go to work. ------------------------ Great work, you're quickly becoming one of my favorite poets. Just remember; if you stop, I'll track you down and kill you Calvin & Hobbes style. (Suck your eyes out with peanut butter.)
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