Psimon Posted May 17, 2003 Report Posted May 17, 2003 I lie alone ****************** I lie alone. I wait for thee and in this darkened hour I call to mind the quiet times that sheltered me in towers. Providing for my every need, this solitude is fair to hold onto each thought it gives to me. The time I share. Thoughts like a child that runs away at moments when I call yet when I turn to leave they will come scrambling down the halls within my mind. Still cluttered now, yes, after all these years. The piles of thoughts and memories, the happiness and tears. And like a child the words will burst onto the pure white page and so each sheet is ruined by the babblings of the age. This was written at about 02:00am while I was waiting for news that my team had won the F A Cup (soccer)... Of course, they did win! YAY!!!! :woot: :woot:
Peredhil Posted May 28, 2003 Report Posted May 28, 2003 Gratz on the win... I don't know though, for me, I had trouble hearing the meter in my mind as I recited it, and some of the line breaks didn't seem to fit. But then, it could just be me. Reading it aloud, what do you think?
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