autumn_sun Posted May 17, 2003 Report Posted May 17, 2003 [[please, for those of you who know me, think nothing of this, I'm doing fine, I just felt like posting this, just cos. I'm all right, ok?! =shakes you= I'M OK!....anyway]] Conflictions The girl dressed in black comes to me Her hair done in two perfect braids, her perfect teeth mocking my crooked ones She laughs and points at the water on my face She tells me I'm pathetic I'm worthless, I'll never be anything I tell her to go away But she only comes closer She's laughing harder now Rocking back and forth, cackling and yelling I'm a loser, I'm imperfect, and I'm a fool She says look at yourself, where have your dreams gotten you? No where, just stuck in this nightmare With no where to go and no one to go to. I scream until my throat goes raw Go away...LEAVE ME ALONE! The grey one tries to push her away He fails. She won't go away He won't let her stay He says it'll all work out She says no it won't. I wonder if it even matters I can yell and scream until I pass out But they'll keep fighting And I'll be in the middle Knowing both are right And wrong at the same time Trapped between the two extremes Trapped inside my head We cannot get out. We are trapped. We cannot get out.
Damon Inferel Posted May 17, 2003 Report Posted May 17, 2003 *mock-slaps pip...* Snap out of it! It's not you! Ack! *shakes pip back* Just kidding, I knew you didn't mean it... he he... sort of. Good poem, though I don't know if you used a real person for either of the two who were arguing. *puts pip between two arguing pieces of bread*
smallscale_mind_games Posted May 17, 2003 Report Posted May 17, 2003 *wanders in, takes the bread, and makes a stubborn argumentative sandwich. Leaves it on Damon's doorstep*
autumn_sun Posted May 18, 2003 Author Report Posted May 18, 2003 merf....Merry...you know who I mean...right? & Damon/Neko Boy...it doesn't matter who they are...
smallscale_mind_games Posted May 18, 2003 Report Posted May 18, 2003 *nods* indeed. Well-written poem by the way.
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