Resolution

[Falcon2001]

Oh you'll never feel better than when you hear her say

She's feeling much better and she'll see you sunday

When you went a little far but now it's alright, yeah

 

When you and your love can make it through the worst

Even when you're feeling like chopped liverwurst

When you can't stop thinking about that night, yeah

 

When you both talk it out and things are alright

And the worries of the day go away with the night

And her voice on the phone says she loves you, yeah

 

When you and her have made it this far

And you come to a problem that's gonna leave a scar

But you make it through 'cause your love is true, oh yeah

 

And you'll never feel better than to hear yourself say

I love you so much and I'll see you on sunday

A resolution's a gift from god above, oh yeah

 

 

Whereas the events outlined in The Morning After did not occur, other events did betwixt me and said girlfriend, but now it's all better, and that's what this poem's about.

[Nyyark]

Pretty cool Falc.

 

I could hear music in my head as I read.

 

Keep up the song lyrics.

 

(personally I think its really hard to write music in lines of three, so all the more impressive)

[Vlad]

This didn't seem to be a song until I hit the 'oh yeah'.

keep it up, I think you might have a future in the music industry.

[Peredhil]

Oh Falcon!

 

I wanna hear an album of your music. You have so much talent!

 

When I think back to your original postings, and compare them with something tight and right like this one, I just SEE such incredible growth -

And it's all you.

 

Good song, I love your upbeat ones. So many people only post when they're down - they're busy living when they're up.

 

Thank you!

 

-Peredhil

[Gyrfalcon]

Very nice, Falcon... as Vlad said, I didn't get the song-sense until the "yeah", but then I went back and added mental background music to the singing. As Peredhil said... when can we hear some of your music? =)