Psimon Posted May 15, 2003 Report Posted May 15, 2003 Temptress **************************** Your lips are poison to my mind blood red poison, fate designed. Can't you see, you're not my kind. With you I cannot be entwined. Your vision's running through my head. I must refuse or I'll be dead, amongst the refuse by your bed another fool up paths you've led. I must escape now. Let me out! You just don't know what I'm about. I've wife and family, have no doubt my love for them you cannot rout! You have no care for my emotion just one more ship upon your ocean. I'm just another affectation well placed enough for your attention. So get behind me, satan's daughter! I'll not be lamb that's lead to slaughter. I've wisdom more and know I ought to leave this place and just forget you.
WrenWind Posted May 15, 2003 Report Posted May 15, 2003 The call of the sirens, powerfull lure to all who sail the seas .
Vlad Posted May 15, 2003 Report Posted May 15, 2003 I wasn't planning on loggin in during school time because I don't have enough open hours, but Psi - I just have to comment! This is a really powerful peice, and I don't know what to say. It's very good, with a feeling or dread and urgency. You're taking all my ideas! Stop it!
Peredhil Posted May 15, 2003 Report Posted May 15, 2003 Reminds me of a poetic rendition of one of my favorite chapters in Proverbs. That's pretty spiffy stuff!
Cheyenne Posted May 15, 2003 Report Posted May 15, 2003 WOW! I love this piece. It has risen to my new favorite as you being the author. ' Darnit! Now I will have to change my thoughts on your help message!!!! Great job!
Salinye Posted May 15, 2003 Report Posted May 15, 2003 Ohhhhhhh I like this one a lot! Not only because it speaks of a temptress but because the man did not give in!! This is among my fav for sure. (A psimon poem among my fav? How shocking....PP) ~Salinye
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