Shadow of the Butterfly Posted May 13, 2003 Report Posted May 13, 2003 Looking left, looking right Down roads with no end in sight I struggle to see the reason Of struggling on Life throws me for a loop And I land on my knees Looking up to God's eyes My prayer is pleading Decisions and heart ache Lonliness and Numbness Greet me in amiable silence Looking left, looking right I pray to find a companion on my travels I struggle to see the reason Of walking alone in this vast emptiness Surely Life is meant for more than merely living
Chanz Posted May 13, 2003 Report Posted May 13, 2003 Surely Life is meant for more than merely living I agree! it's a good point!
Peredhil Posted May 13, 2003 Report Posted May 13, 2003 This is really good well done. Not only do you express feeling to which many can relate- you do it in an easily readable manner. good job.
Matteo Posted May 14, 2003 Report Posted May 14, 2003 (edited) The trials and tribulations of life always make for wonderful poetry, yours is no acception, I love it Too bad its soo true for so many people though... I love that line, "Surely Life is meant for more than merely living", it's so insightful, yet so amny people can't find its meaning or bear its truth. Matteo Edited May 14, 2003 by Matteo
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