Mother's Day Poem

[Salinye]

(Yes, I did not know what Acrostic meant until Alaeha wrote Despair, but that's beside the point entirely!! PP)

 

Mother dear, you amazing Spirit,

Only you could have raised me to be

The person I am. It is with merit

How you’ve been an example to me.

Every observer can see your love is pure,

Real, unconditional as solid as cement.

So few things in life are this sure.

 

Let me take this moment to lament.

Of all the times I didn’t make you see,

Vow to you how much you’ve meant.

Entwined in my soul you’ll forever be.

Edited May 11, 2003 by Salinye

[smallscale_mind_games]

*sniffle* pretty poem. I wish I'd written something nice-ish for mother's day.

[Alaeha]

Wow... My writing actually influenced someone else's... Should I be flattered, or frightened? I think I'll opt for the former unless told otherwise.

 

Very nice poem... Wish I'd thought to write something for Mother's Day far enough in advance to write something worthwhile. I'm glad you did. This one is good.

[gjunon]

AWESOME poem my mom cried when she read mine :'( i am sure your mom will also

[Chanz]

That truely is gorgeous