Guest squashai Posted May 9, 2003 Report Posted May 9, 2003 Malcontent Offensamment égoïste bonheur corrompant Il prospère entre nous. --------------------------------------------- Malcontent Hurtfully selfish tainting happiness it thrives among us. Quote
Peredhil Posted May 9, 2003 Report Posted May 9, 2003 Passes out in shock at seeing this forum used. Rah! Quote
Lady Celes Crusader Posted May 10, 2003 Report Posted May 10, 2003 Nice poem, although it some words aren't "liguistically" correct. Douloureusement égoïste Bonheur séduisant Il prospère en nous. In French, "Offensant" is preffered to "Offensamment". But, since it destroyed the rhyme, I've replaced it with "Douloureusement" "Séduisant" can be used for both "Seductive" or "Tempting". By no mean, I want this to be considered as diminutive, but rather as helpful. Quote
Justin Silverblade Posted May 10, 2003 Report Posted May 10, 2003 Very nice! Tres Bien! ( <--The extent of my french knowledge) Quote
Guest squashai Posted May 18, 2003 Report Posted May 18, 2003 (edited) Heh, I stink at french. The extent of my knowledge is how to describe people. Petit et grand, blond et brune, etc... Thanks for the feedback, though. I used a internet translator. It was originally a kaiku for my english class.. Ironic, is it not? But when I learn more I will post here with things that I wrote first in french, this I promise. Edited May 18, 2003 by squashai Quote
Lady Celes Crusader Posted May 18, 2003 Report Posted May 18, 2003 That's fine with me. I'll never, ever judge someone upon the quality of his/her French as I know how capricious the tongue really is. Your effort is commendable and I'll help you writing anything you need in French. Quote
Guest squashai Posted May 18, 2003 Report Posted May 18, 2003 I appreciate your enthusiasm; you people are really nice. Thank you. Quote
Lady Celes Crusader Posted May 21, 2003 Report Posted May 21, 2003 You are as enthusiast as I am, I guess. And the goal of the Pen is to help each other in their writing in every aspects. And your avatar is so cute. Quote
Passionsrejected05 Posted November 23, 2003 Report Posted November 23, 2003 *claps* Tres Bien! (Is only a French First Year Student) Quote
Arlequin Posted August 12, 2004 Report Posted August 12, 2004 Yes it was really good. The rythm was nice, and the meaning interesting. Quote
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