Psimon Posted May 8, 2003 Report Posted May 8, 2003 What? ************************ As I sit here alone, in my room the vision comes once more. The darkness, then the light, fills me with a jewel, my heart, the core. Racked by the weeping of a girl standing, lying, dying. She does it to feed her children. To appease their hunger crying. My mind, the lens, crosses dunes in the early morning haze. Roaring beasts fill my ears till there's no recognition of the days. Arms reaching, hands touching me cold stillness, their embrace. I must leave this memory dead here but the thoughts keep up the chase. I reached for the secret too soon. To possess it. Was I mad? For what I might have held, did I lose all that I had?
Peredhil Posted May 13, 2003 Report Posted May 13, 2003 I had to read this twice, it makes me think. On first pass, I think I read into it. On the second I read what was actually written - and it was better.
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