fremder Posted May 4, 2003 Report Posted May 4, 2003 Whirling twirling on through life. Joy and sadness, follow the show. Sterling silver on his finger. Bound through love and on we go. Reeling feeling life though love. Blue-green skies, above the plateau. Pink surrounds his hair of silk. Bound through love and on we go. Singing bring joy to those. Those who's love on head bestow. Statue of gold belongs to him. Bound through love and on they go. Caring wearing a smile of warmth. Look into thine eyes aglow. Bound by fate, protected by love. Throughout their lives they go.
Ayshela Posted May 4, 2003 Report Posted May 4, 2003 (edited) i like this to fit the rest of your pattern this Singing bring joy to those.should probably be Singing bringing but that's the only thing i noticed out of place at all. i'm sure they'll like it. edited to fix a stupid spelling error Edited May 4, 2003 by Ayshela
Peredhil Posted May 4, 2003 Report Posted May 4, 2003 reads like a loving wedding wish to me. Nicely done - Peredhil
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