Psimon Posted April 29, 2003 Report Posted April 29, 2003 Around the World ************************** Around the world in twenty days around my head the music plays Around the office see the light around the garden, sparrow's flight Around the block we did talk around the bend as we walk Around we go one more time around and round to catch the rhyme
Gwaihir Posted April 29, 2003 Report Posted April 29, 2003 Catchy light and fun pleasant and enjoyable to read
Thinas Posted April 29, 2003 Report Posted April 29, 2003 This reminds me of something one of the Lord of the Rings hobbits would sing as they went through a forest. Which indirectly means I agree with Gwai. It's cheerful and relaxing somehow...Relaxing, because it doesn't seem to be a complaint or a protest. Many poems are. Enjoyable, as has been said. /Thinas\
Cheyenne Posted May 5, 2003 Report Posted May 5, 2003 ya know the only thing I don't like about this poem? Now I can't get it out of my head...reminds me of the 80's don't worry be happy song....
Recommended Posts