autumn_sun Posted April 23, 2003 Report Posted April 23, 2003 (edited) I listen to my AFI cd /way/ too much...can you tell? And before you interpret this as a suicide...thing...I'm fine! When I fade away, like an old forgotten photograph... Who will remember me? No one, save for the shadows holding me These snow white demons run through my head like fallen angels in disguise This blood that courses through us falls like rain Choking, consuming, this darkness does swallow The fire that steals souls, burning them into nothing Dance in the cinders... I've faded into the shadows... Will anyone remember me when I'm gone? ~ The rather lame poetic Autumn Sun Edited April 23, 2003 by autumn_sun
autumn_sun Posted April 23, 2003 Author Report Posted April 23, 2003 (edited) And another completely random thing that I really can't justify my thinking for... This silent call, this instinct, facing your demons, should you fight or take flight ...You cannot win this, they'll never stop until you admit defeat. But take my hand now, With our hearts ablaze, we shall die tonight... Our hands intertwined like vines, drink the wine from the lead cup and toast to the emptiness inside. ~ The AFI Lyric obsessed Autumn Sun Edited April 23, 2003 by autumn_sun
WrenWind Posted April 23, 2003 Report Posted April 23, 2003 I love the second bit . It hits a strange cord in me . it's always a good thing to write it down even if it doesn't make sence at the time.
Peredhil Posted April 24, 2003 Report Posted April 24, 2003 There are some really good 'seed' ideas in here I'd love to see worked and developed. Nice starts.
troubled sleep Posted May 3, 2003 Report Posted May 3, 2003 I liked the first one quite a bit actually. The prospect of being forgotton is something I tend to face often, it seems...
Elwen Posted May 4, 2003 Report Posted May 4, 2003 "Those you have loved and lost will live on in your hearts, as long as you remember."-Me Nice poems, Pip. They're beautiful...especially the first one. And you will never be forgotten.
autumn_sun Posted May 4, 2003 Author Report Posted May 4, 2003 =sits on Lynne's head= hey, guess what?? THE ENTIRE WEISS KREUZ THING IS COMING OUT ON DVD ON MAY 27!!!! YES!! =grins stupidly= but it's $75...grr. anyway, thanks y'all for your lovely comments...
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