Psimon Posted April 16, 2003 Report Posted April 16, 2003 Oui, j'ai vécu... (Yes, I have lived...) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I have oft looked into my glass orb, seen the future, the past, the now I have wept bitter tears and sighed as would a lover satisfied I have seen children crying for lack of food, for lack of love I have heard their lamentations and my heart has broken in sorrow I have seen lovers embrace exploring, tenderly pushing the boundaries of their longing and my heart has soared in joy I have seen killers loose on the innocent the weapons of mass annihilation in the name of their gods and my blood has stirred to anger I have seen myself lost in a void of time and space with no escape and no ending and my blood has chilled with fear I have seen a flower bloom in the desert sands where no life could exist and my mind has been stilled in reverence Yes, I have seen a great many things I have felt a great many emotions I have tasted my tears and I have caught my breath in awe Yes, I have lived
wyldpatienz Posted April 16, 2003 Report Posted April 16, 2003 This is a beautiful piece of writing. You've combined an observers' view and your personal emotions superbly. You've covered a lifetime in so few words. Well done. Tyler
Salinye Posted April 17, 2003 Report Posted April 17, 2003 I really enjoyed this, thank you for sharing your perspective through poetry. ~Salinye
WrenWind Posted April 17, 2003 Report Posted April 17, 2003 I love this poem and I am honoured to have heard you read it aloud . Thank you
reverie Posted April 18, 2003 Report Posted April 18, 2003 nice use structure... be careful not be trapped by it though... revery the dreamlost "seek to find, your silly ryhme" the dream continues...
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