Alaeha Posted April 14, 2003 Report Posted April 14, 2003 Wrote this little bugger yesterday. The initial question was one that I found in the book I finished that morning. The rest was spawned by the fact that I feel like I’m growing distant from the world at large... And it bothers and even worries me. Perhaps more than it should. Be that as it may... The poem, though not true of me (and in fact not even showing my true attitudes) still rings true, showing my more cynical and pessimist side. But with little further ado: The poem. What color is your heart? What is the color of your heart today? Is it of gold, or silver, pink, or green? Is your soul clad in robes of dismal gray, or does it wear a brighter, happy sheen? The loneliness you feel will pass with time, so worry not about Love, it will wane with passing days, and though it seems sublime, you will find that it leads to naught but pain. What color is your heart? You never spoke an answer, for I rambled on too long. You miss your Loved One still? Your heart she broke when two days back she left you with a song. A mournful tune. Your heart, my friend, is blue. I sympathize, for I lost my Love too.
Celiwyn Posted April 14, 2003 Report Posted April 14, 2003 Very nice Alaeha, wow. It's very touching... tugs at my heart a bit. Don't worry about friends drifting... I'm not going anywhere... I plan to stick by you and you know that. *hugs*
Peredhil Posted April 14, 2003 Report Posted April 14, 2003 how neat. a good poem AND in sonnet form! don't see many that combination any more.
Archaneus Posted April 14, 2003 Report Posted April 14, 2003 Well, I have to say,I totally agree with the idea presented. Great job.
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