Foolishness

[Chanz]

I sit here and think,

Think about how you did me wrong,

Think about how you treated me bad,

And remember that I was never very strong.

 

No matter what you did,

I kept going back,

Because I thought it was love,

But all it did was make me black.

 

You hit me,

You called me names,

You laughed at my mistakes,

You played mind games.

 

You scoffed at my foolishness,

You thought i'd never leave,

You thought you had me tricked,

But I was not that naive.

 

You thought you had me forever,

You believed you had me won,

You didn't think i'd wise up,

But I know everything you've done.

 

I'm not as dumb as I look,

I am a girl, but a clever one,

I am foolish,

But in the end it was me who won.

[gjunon]

we all wise up in the end interesting poem i could see why you wrote it but are you going to give it to him now?

[Chanz]

nah, i'm not going to give it to him.

[Peredhil]

I like the triumphant end. There are a lot of people who need to read this - to know there is a way out of the trap.

[Elvida]

*claps for you* good job Chanz....youi've just taken my place as a great writer.... im now in like 55th place....