Weak Love

[Vlad]

Love is for the weak,

A festering Plague,

Found in this world-

Full of Romeos,

'Tis such a disgrace,

To be seen near them,

Flaunting everything,

Living for love's sake,

Loving for life's time,

Corrupted clouds create,

Such a pain to bear,

 

For we live as one,

And I am the weak.

[Peredhil]

wow. A blistering diatrebe against a certain type, originally identified as the week...

 

and then you turn it around and in and identify yourself with that group, denying the reader the choice of saying, "well, you just don't understand."

 

Very effective technique!

[Justin Silverblade]

Simplicity, and yet so very engaging. I couldn't help but read it again and again. Sorry I didn't catch it when you first posted it.

 

Bravo, good work! Thanks for sharing it - I enjoyed it very much.

 

- Justin

[Salinye]

I mimic Peredhil's words!!

 

I loved it!

 

~Salinye

[Cheyenne]

I guess that makes me weak as well. Very well written, I enjoyed it immensley (sp?)